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New World Order, Chapter 4: Canvas of Skin (Brock) — 4 Comments

  1. OOOOOH, Lookie! A perfectly formatted post! Congratulations!

    I love the interaction between Brock and Jon here, how cocky Brock is and how Jon responds to it. It really whets my appetite for more between them, and I wonder if Jon will respond to Brock\’s advances.

    I like how Brock agrees to speak with Gran, too, but not right away. I like how he obviously cares for his sister, but it\’s not overly sweet or silly. It\’s very plausible for how a brother would act. I can\’t wait for more!

  2. I\’m getting so into what\’s going on with Brock and Jon, but I really enjoyed getting a deeper sense of the twins\’ relationship, too. So much good stuff! Well done.

  3. Every time you drop another hint about the twins and their relationship and family I want to know. I\’m fascinated by the magic stuff and really intrigued by the interactions between Brock and Jon too.

  4. Thanks, Nikki and Reka! It\’s been a lot of fun developing this world. It\’s even dragged me (kicking and screaming, albeit) into doing more orderly lists of chapters – I will NOT call it an outline, dammit! 🙂

    It\’s fun working with Rachel. We\’ve developed a good working relationship in the process of developing these stories as well as the one we submitted to the publisher in May. I look forward to lots more of Brock, Belinda, and the gang.

    Thanks for reviewing!