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New World Order, Chapter Five: Superimposed (Belinda) — 5 Comments

  1. I love pretty darn near everything about this chapter. You really get a sense that Belinda\’s getting to the edge. When she brings up the dead man she sees in his head the whole conversation felt very real. Eventually he\’s going to realize what else she probably saw 🙂 I\’m glad they were able to keep the case and am very curious how Jon was able to persuade them. Nicely done.

  2. There\’s so much tension running around in this chapter. I can\’t wait to see how Jon reacts as more and more of Belinda\’s ability becomes obvious. Even though she sees him bailing on her, I think he\’ll stick around and that will certainly keep things interesting.